Revised Thesis and "Stuff"

Thesis: "The solution to making raves a safer place, is by conducting random drug searches during the rave".

Con: By having drug searches it will take away from the fun at the rave. Also without the drugs some may feel they can't cope with stress.

Pro: Drug searches will actually create a safer environment because everyone will have a clear head and the will be able to make decisions easier.

Pro: Having the searches, people will not do drugs which prevents them from being caught for doing something illegal!

-Kaimi Carreira