Tuesday, September 22, 2009

College Essay Draft

Having to go to Moanalua High School, an hour and a half journey from the place I live. A place where people have different mindsets and mentalities. A place that is always on a fast pace and is always "going". A place where I don't fit in because of my personality and the way I was raised. This was all part of a significant event that changed my life.

Growing up in Kaneohe, I was raised being taught to try make friends and be outgoing. In Kaneohe, people have the reputation of being very confident, almost cocky. Naturally, being in that environment, I also began to gain a lot of confidence. To me and everyone else around me this was normal.

However, my mom didn't feel that going to school in Kaneohe was in my best interests. And despite much protesting, my mom put in a G.E. for Moanalua. When I was excepted, I was actually kind of excited to go to a new school, because I had always been good at making friends. However I was nervous because I had never really associated with "town" people due to the fact of living in Kahalu'u which is considered "country".

After awhile I began to hate moanalua because of the way people acted-it wasn't what I was used to. Also, people got irritated at things that in the windward side, people would find normal. However, I adapted to the environment, and began to fit in better with different people. The whole experience taught me how to adapt to unfamiliar places and overall, it made me a better person.

Wednesday, September 16, 2009

Journal 9

I have recently read The Perks of Being a Wallflower and it really showed the coming of age of a boy named charlie. In the beginning of the story, the author portrays Charlie as a loner and a good boy that always gets straight A's. However throughout the story, Charlie begins making friends and is influenced greatly by them. He begins to smoke cigarettes, weed, and even gets a girlfriend. Towards the end of the book, It gets noticeable that charlie has matured and was a prime example of a coming of age story.

Journal 8

The colleges that I'm thinking of attending is UH Manoa, University of North Carolina, University of Southern California, or if I have no other choice Community College.

UH Manoa
University of North Carolina
University of Southern California
Maui Community College

-Kaimi Carreira